http://www.gunsofshadowvalley.com/2009/09/03/chapter-1-page-16/ Tue, 07 Sep 2010 23:27:48 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.gunsofshadowvalley.com/2009/09/03/chapter-1-page-16/comment-page-1/#comment-1194 mhlynch53 Tue, 29 Jun 2010 06:48:42 +0000 http://www.gunsofshadowvalley.com/2009/09/03/chapter-1-page-16/#comment-1194 Oh man! I love the movement in this chapter, the pouring of the alcohol to divide the page, the lighting of the cigarette. You have an amazing ability to create movement on the page. Beautiful. Oh man! I love the movement in this chapter, the pouring of the alcohol to divide the page, the lighting of the cigarette. You have an amazing ability to create movement on the page. Beautiful.

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