Comments on: Chapter 2 Page 18

By: RICHSAN

RICHSAN — Sat, 05 Dec 2009 01:03:54 +0000

a friend of mine turned me on to this site. i can only say “WOW!”
i went back and read the entire story (so far) in one sitting-risking my job (cause i’m at work), but i couldn’t help myself. always nice to see great story and art come together-magic! james you’ve crafted a riveting story and david, your storyboards are phenominal-i’m hooked-thanks

By: James Andrew Clark

James Andrew Clark — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 16:43:49 +0000

Hey evaD, thanks for the kind words. It’s nice when the writer gets recognized! But let’s not forget that Dave and I write this together, so I can’t take all the credit.

By: zack kruse

zack kruse — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 15:31:40 +0000

Another great page guys!

Now I’m starting to get antsy for all of these characters to get together just to see how they interact with one another.

I also dig the outright villainous look of Scorpion and I wonder what his deal is, I mean why has the Army hired him? What do they have to gain by hiring a seemingly obvious monster?

Like I said, good stuff all around guys! Keep it up!

By: evaD

evaD — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 10:23:24 +0000

Dave, I’ve commented several times on the drawing, but haven’t said much about the coloring and I’m not sure why. Looking back over the pages, you’ve been doing a fabulous job with the colors, they really set the tone for the story beautifully.

And Jim, I don’t want to leave you out. You’ve really crafted a very compelling story. The pacing, dialogue, and plot are all well thought out. The characterizations are strong.

Keep up the great work guys!

By: Steeven

Steeven — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 15:12:29 +0000

Yeah, “hobble your lip” is a pretty good phrase . . . I think I’ll use that on my kids tonight