Chapter 2 Page 18
December 3rd, 2009

Chapter 2 Page 18


  1. Nuggie99

    I vow to use “Hobble your lip” today in conversation.

  2. Steeven

    Yeah, “hobble your lip” is a pretty good phrase . . . I think I’ll use that on my kids tonight 🙂

  3. evaD

    Dave, I’ve commented several times on the drawing, but haven’t said much about the coloring and I’m not sure why. Looking back over the pages, you’ve been doing a fabulous job with the colors, they really set the tone for the story beautifully.

    And Jim, I don’t want to leave you out. You’ve really crafted a very compelling story. The pacing, dialogue, and plot are all well thought out. The characterizations are strong.

    Keep up the great work guys!

  4. zack kruse

    Another great page guys!

    Now I’m starting to get antsy for all of these characters to get together just to see how they interact with one another.

    I also dig the outright villainous look of Scorpion and I wonder what his deal is, I mean why has the Army hired him? What do they have to gain by hiring a seemingly obvious monster?

    Like I said, good stuff all around guys! Keep it up!

  5. James Andrew Clark

    Hey evaD, thanks for the kind words. It’s nice when the writer gets recognized! But let’s not forget that Dave and I write this together, so I can’t take all the credit.


    a friend of mine turned me on to this site. i can only say “WOW!”
    i went back and read the entire story (so far) in one sitting-risking my job (cause i’m at work), but i couldn’t help myself. always nice to see great story and art come together-magic! james you’ve crafted a riveting story and david, your storyboards are phenominal-i’m hooked-thanks